Theblkempire Brandon

9 years ago

stop rhyming your last word with the same word. You slowly get better when you incorporate different words. And remember words dont have to rhyme 100% but get it as close as possible to break the repetitive habit. #ConstructiveCriticsm

TRILLE$T.

9 years ago

@tweed much appreciation bro, i gotta focus more on punchlines for songs lmao. i run with jrb so back when we used to battle in there i use to make all my punches for battles😂 but anyways youre damn right, keep putting in that work man, thanks again💯😎

🐐🔥✒TwEeDAkABaRKiNG✒🔥🐐

9 years ago

i hear ya.... I think I only heard maybe one or one and a half punchlines though..... keep at it just keep on putting in that work