Hyper (14:56)
Joseph Newsomeim white but i still write trying to figure away outa this dam fright i dont no where im gone but i gotta get new plans an expand it's time to move on make my own foot steps to where im gone ive been through hell stuck in motels specifically on grand river an fifth in Detroit sickly intense need to flea this life its a cursed can it get any worse my own family stabbed me in my back an at same time telling lies making false images to people about me set me up when i was only 19 teen caused me to become a felony fuck this ive had it with this shit lose my number or ill erase you from my life own my own just me and my wife gotta move on an i still write she a for lifer it hurts you to see im happy just her and me an remember you double crossed me so many times so fuck you this time you caused me so much ptsd its not right ill still face everybody thats right im not scared if you wanna fight meet me ill take on all 3 of you at one time ill face you guys thats damn right because i only live one life i dont get a second chance this time
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keep up the good work and you will get there
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