Tired
Dominator28 Plays
•16 Dec 2022
I'm tired of this life which is as sharp as a knife I'm tired of running this race because of this case I'm tired of being on my own living in my own zone I'm tired of waiting in line when I know am not fine I'm tired of living a lIE. I rather just dIE I'm speaking in pain cause I've been bound by chains whose gonna set me free whose gonna make me see the sea if I'm left here alone to lie i think I rather just die
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Hi @dominatingboss! Here's a couple tips for your track 'Tired'! 💥 1. Try using the rhyme generator to develop even more on your first rap! ✍️ 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 4. Try mixing up different light studio effects on your vocals to give your track the perfect sound every time. 🎤 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. This was a nice taste, but we're gonna need a longer track if you want us to give you detailed feedback! 7. There's a $1,000 prize pool in our weekly contests 🏆 Think you got what it takes? Try creating a track based on this week's theme! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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