Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Now that's what we're talking about @photonphoenix, Nice job on your first track 'monsters'! 1. Practice makes perfect and you're on the right track! Keep on working on those details and the success will come. 2. Rap music is about the whole package! 📦 Be sure to show off all the skills that make you great! 3. We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! 4. Get immediate feedback on your track with Judge 4 Judge! You and another user simultaneously provide feedback for each other's track, helping you to level up on your next drop! 💥 Send your next track to hot so we can see how you took our tips on board!💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Photon Phoenix

2 years ago

A monsters under the bed it’s trying to find me….I ran to the closet ones right beside me……I have these feelings that are trapped inside me….oh yah did I mention that there all together…..I’m gonna burn them all in a smelter….I’m done with this shit it’s all in my brain it’s making me not feel the same…..yah demons and monsters they all look the same one tries to kill me the other take my brain I can’t run cause I feel insane….so go ahead and ring the bell cause I’m trapped in hell and I can’t escape I just want out I hope it’s not to late….day to day life is always haunting it’s always had it’s way with taunting….yah undertrose I overdose with the thoughts inside me..thoughts inside me… I take to much and I try to stop but they always find me..always find me… I’ve had enough with this world that tries to be so perfect…be so perfect..I think it’s failing it’s always wailing and asking for help.. asking for help…yah cause a monsters under my bed and I tried to find me…I ran to the closet and it’s right beside me…I have these feelings for that are trapped inside me…I just want it all to end…yah I can’t do this anymore why can’t you just put me in a morgue with the dead bodies that are all beside me because I feel so dead inside me…yah natural disasters are all so crazy..it’s making me feel so hazy..yah I’ve had enough of this overtose volcanoes and earthquakes all so close…you’ve probably been told that I’m crazy…but human meat is kinda tasty…it’s probably time to wrap this up…I’ve spun my thread and I’m going to bed and the dreams are all so crazy..my head is always feeling spacey..the monsters found me now I’m crazy