The Beginning π
Jhay Dorth27 Plays
β’29 Nov 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, Itβs a risk, But Iβll take it, Feeling like Iβm living Stuck in the basement, Iβm just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But Iβll make it, I canβt wait a long time Iβm anxious, Iβve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Now that's what we're talking about @jhaydorth, Nice job on your first track 'The Beginning π'! 1. Flows are just as important as bars, practice HOW you wanna spit them bars! π£ 2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π 3. Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! π§ 4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! π² Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 5. This was a nice taste, but we're gonna need a longer track if you want us to give you detailed feedback! 6. Did you know we have lots more Masterclasses to choose from? There's harder ones too if you're looking for more of a challenge! π― Overall this junt eat fam! Can't wait to see what else you drop! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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