Jay E

Eli

Jay E
Eli

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28 Nov 2022

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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2 years ago

first time in well done you 🤠😊😊😊😊 well

2 years ago

Not really good flow there bruh you can do better,you gat a dope voice just channel the inner you and bring the rapster out💯

2 years ago

Yo @jaye.7978632! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'Eli '! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Flows are just as important as bars, practice HOW you wanna spit them bars! 🗣 2. Once you find a good recording set up, stick with it! Rapping is all about consistency, try and apply this to every level of your music! 3. Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! 4. Try adding some of the in-app effects to your next track to take it to a whole new level. 5. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 6. The track is just a little short for us to give our full thoughts, try submitting something a bit more complete. 7. Did you know we have lots more Masterclasses to choose from? There's harder ones too if you're looking for more of a challenge! 💯 Try joining a crew to build with other artists, we hope you share your music with the Rap Fame Community again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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