first step
Purp Breezy ¥17 Plays
•27 Nov 2022
the lower grave first step to eternity burning me with flames devils honor I am a gonna a dark sight my body craving shivering in fear so I am gonna go 20 feet below were nobody know unless experienced impression is a session so grave the blessing taking out my intestines d.o.a on the spot seen my casket drop tombstone set my ho me now my soul is all alone while your preying feelings the pain for me why he had to go so soon I ain't see his ass in many moons every sun the rises we think of all his surprises how he lived his life another young thug gone around our waywhile his family holds his baby pictures memories to destiny got the best of me can't see me now I'm gone haunt your ass from dusk to dawn.
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nice beat track vocalz 👌🏿👌🏿👍🏿 keep grinding on
we can wait to hear more💥💥💥💯💯🔥🔥🔥💯💯💥💥💥
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