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BattleMe (16:29:08)

joeraps
BattleMe (16:29:08)

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15 Nov 2022

One of one NFL week 9 song NFC The Eagles run is over Washington saved the league Cowboys got the ball and still lost in OT Saquon seemed quite hungry So the giants let him brawl I still don’t know Jefferson Somehow caught that ball Fields is a bright spot but he’s not enough To beat Dan Campbell’s lions who were playing tough The packers aren’t dead But the falcons sure are Foreman plowed through That defense like he was a car The saints don’t have a team Or a first round pick Tom brady didn’t seem even a little homesick The rams are disappointing You can’t beat the niners d Everyone hurt for the cards Seahawks hate Germany That’s all from me here in week 10 If you subscribe I’d be so glad My fantasy team had Kupp and Ertz So that is why I’m rather sad

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nice work keep working hard and don't never stop

Keep pushing and grinding and you’ll get there

2 years ago

Now that's what we're talking about @joeraps.7937604, Nice job on your first track 'BattleMe (16:29:08)'! 1. Practice makes perfect and you're on the right track! Keep on working on those details and the success will come. 2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 🌟 3. Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 4. Try using some of our vocal FX (ft. Autotune!) to spice up your next track! 5. This was a nice taste, but we're gonna need a longer track if you want us to give you detailed feedback! 6. Try entering one of our weekly contests for the chance at winning the $500 grand prize! 🥇 Try joining a crew to build with other artists, we hope you share your music with the Rap Fame Community again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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