second tryout
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•10 Nov 2022
I put my life on standby I was winning by a landslide You ever seen a beat get eaten By a man live? You tune in to my IG, I'll show you why I can't lie, Baddies in my DM, I want em, that's a damn lie. I fly solo came in the world dolo Labels beating on my door, They asking me for promo. Look I been a boss, Get crossed I'm “A.I”-ing, Flying off the jump, I'm Jordan I'm stage diving. I’m a club packa, My nine'll stay firin', Beefing like Lover Boy And Donda on an island. I'm shooting my shot with Kim while Ye stay wildin', Paparazzi getting off shots, That's paid timing. I'm a diamond in da ruff, I’on dine em I’on cuff em, Splash em in they face, Kelly Rowland with the cup when the doors open up, We don't speak, keep it hush. When the doors open up, We don’t speak, hush
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Fire track keep up the good work🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💯💯🔥
Can hardly hear your voice but the best go hard.bring another one.
Now that's what we're talking about @ntokozojezile, Nice job on your first track 'second tryout'! 1. Flows are just as important as bars, practice HOW you wanna spit them bars! 🗣 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! 😲 Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 5. This was too short to give you any proper feedback, can you drop something a bit longer? 6. Make the step up to the Rap Fame Studio to produce a full track! Overall this junt eat fam! Can't wait to see what else you drop! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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