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First thing I noticed was your recording quality needs work. Try using a denoise tool and even record on Bandlab if you're not already. Secondly, work on riding the beat to flow better, and this is easier when you have rhymes that hit on beat. Lastly, the song content could use work. Unless you want to put yourself on a path to a jail cell, don't try and be cool and rap about guns. You don't want to take off like Takeoff, right? With that said, just making the song and practicing the craft is important and if you need to talk about guns to fit the theme of your song, do you. Just know words have power and with great power, comes great responsibility 🕸
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