Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @donmellowi.c.w.n.t.! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'my bro'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. The demo track can really help to nail the flow on this one, delivery is important! 🎤 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 4. Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying. 5. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 6. We're gonna need a longer track if you want some feedback! 7. Try out the Rhyme Helper to develop your bars & step up your first track! Try joining a crew to build with other artists, we hope you share your music with the Rap Fame Community again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Don Mellow I.C.W.N.T.

2 years ago

let me tell you about a hard life let me tell you my life let me tell you about my bro's life see our life is the same but so different we've been locked behind the chains we ran with the gangs but it's a shame I'm stuck out here with my phone he stuck behind the bar still I'm still trying to get my head right I know how it be it storms like a mother f***** I need to send that commissary so he can have a canteen we used to run on the streets never stop to think for a second where we was going to be when we grew up all we thought about