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18 Sep 2022

getting to it

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2 years ago

beat hard can't reall hear you.Need more bars .Deliver it better.The concept is there.Try to be more versatile.Rap louder.Try a faster beat.More up tempi lower faster like folrida type shit you feel me.Over all you got something only you know what it is so let us know don't make us discover.let us feel you hear you.Dont want to guess.I got a good ear enough to make it what it is.Definentlt work on your craft there is an audience out there for it no doubt.Dont make us guess tho.Come strong sound out your words speak loud.Dont be afraid there's worse but there is definitely better.So be more out there.Let your message be known playa.Haters always going to be there shawty.This is coming from a California nigga that's heard all swags styles lyrics battles disses bitches gangsta and stars.

2 years ago

getting to it

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