Daniel
Daniel

shoot for the 🌟

shoot for the 🌟

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12 Sep 2022

Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself

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2 years ago

hello i you wish good Luck for thé future

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2 years ago

Hi @daniel.7646040! Here's a couple tips for your track 'shoot for the 🌟'! 💥 1. Keep learning from the legends and have one eye on the lyrics to get a feel for that flow! 👀 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! 😲 Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! 7. If you liked this, we have a whole library with more Masterclasses for you to try! There's even difficult difficulties for you as you progress. 💯 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame team 😎

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