Peter Pan
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β’27 Aug 2022
your love is Devine I'm just trying to define the feelings I refine it's crazy the way I feel but I know it's real this packed that I sealed I'm not the one playing youuuu I don't know what to dooo why would I try If your just going to lie but ik thats not it so I'll sit and enjoy what I can I'll fly like Peter pan awayyyyy to the life I made within my head demons want me dead all I see is red when I come to that place I can not erase the feeling that I had it can't all be my dad all the life that I've seen it's bad im a fean for the drug that take me to a place I'm happy I'm scared to be alone that why your always on my phone I love the way you make me feel it's hard to tell if it's real for you I would kill in this place I stand still you mean the world to me and I hope you'd agree to be with me #RBHFVOL27 #HASHTAG #featured #rap #hiphop #music #rapper #trap #rapmusic #beats #artist #newmusic #producer #hiphopmusic #love #rappers #explorepage #freestyle #soundcloud #art #spotify #youtube #trapmusic #explore #hiphopculture #follow #musicproducer #dj #rnb #beat #musician #bhfyp #beatmaker
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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Yo @metastacks, It's time for us to take a look at 'Peter Pan'! π₯ Super dope concept to this, we love the ideas you've brought to the table. "Why would I try if you're just gonna lie" we were feeling your pain and raw emotion in this track. Stay strong fighting those demons. Great beat choice, enjoyed the floaty piano behind the drums, it really added a touch of sadness and depth to the track. This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try to work on new flows and timings on the beat to showcase your talent. Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
maybe add hook should b good kp goin. Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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