Nikobala L'69 🌈

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @matty06, It's time for us to take a look at 'one day '! 💥 Try extending the track length some more, we wanna hear more from you! Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Intense beat, you came in hard! 🔥 Nice choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the mic🎤 before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ‍🔥 - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Element oso

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥