Heartless/Freestyle
freestyle based on real life experiences well . I am G5 ...... so please lmk what you think should I make it a full song ?
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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Hey @caseywilliams103083, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Heartless/Freestyle '! π₯ Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! π§ "I'm causing drama" π― Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. π You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π "I been heartless" - liked this hook, it was catchy!Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Loving the beat selection, good ear! The overall sound quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the micπ€ before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! β¨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! βπ₯ - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! π - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π― Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Keep grindin Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: On point π― Impression: Great π
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