no dissing
Raashan JacksonNiggas wanna play we gon send shots to da face run up on me wrong you gon die today Ian playin games call my cousin up he gon slide wit da whole gang smokin str8 woods to da face ts hurt my brain
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Wassup @llcplubcj1, Thank you for sharing 'no dissing' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: "we gon send shots to da face run up on me wrong you gon die today" - you on badness with this flow right here! The timing is dope on this one, but we think you could come even harder with the delivery! This would defo take you to the next level & we got faith! π Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Also try ending this one less suddenly with a fade out or just by letting the beat ride. This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the micπ€ before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! β¨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! βπ₯ - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π― - We'd love to hear more from you, this track was super short! Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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