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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @jexxa! Thanks for sharing 'dear who ever gives a ' with us! 💥 "don't get uneasy when I'm rhyming cheesy ... don't make it queasy" you were really on top of the rhyme scheme here. Sometimes your bars didn't rhyme as well and I think the track was at its best when the rhymes were coming thick and fast so don't hold back next time! Turning the vocal volume up a notch would really improve the mix. You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Love the energy in the beat with that constant cycling synth line - I think it complemented your vocal style well. 🧨 Great cover too - really helped get your personality and intensity across. You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎 ⭐Key improvement to help your track get featured: Audio Quality on the vocals could be improved slightly (perhaps trying a different pair of headphones with a mic?)
Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯
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