Billal🤙🏼❤

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Good 💛 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @kingelpacobizz3.5, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'SmOkE', here are our thoughts 💥 Your bars are good, keep it up! 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 It's harddd, adds so much energy to the track 🔋 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. Just keep working on improving that audio quality, we can see that potential in you, but your lyrics just aren’t coming through clearly for us. Improving the clarity in your bars will do a world of difference! The voice effects are slightly too much and are taking away from your bars as well! We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

ᵂ𝙂ᴬ𝝤ⱽ𝘿ᴱ ❦ 𝘿𝙐𝙍𝙊

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥