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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Yo @williamshuck, It's time for us to take a look at 'jockin 24's'! ๐ฅ "I'm climbing to the top, that's what I came to do" - we love this attitude ๐ Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. ๐ถ Great beat choice, really works with the track! Try improving your recording quality if you can. Keep working on that audio quality, your bars are clear, but could sound a little less robotic ๐ค Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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