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"I'm burnt like hot coffee" you were spitting hot lava throughout this track!
Incredible lyrics here, maintain this form! β¨ You got rhymes to rival Eminem! π²
Love the beat choice too, the deep piano added real depth to your sound.
This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time:
- Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track.
- The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π―
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @RaloDuran, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Back The F**k Me '! π₯ "I'm burnt like hot coffee" you were spitting hot lava throughout this track! Incredible lyrics here, maintain this form! β¨ You got rhymes to rival Eminem! π² Love the beat choice too, the deep piano added real depth to your sound. This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π― Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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