intro

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11 Aug 2022

um coming in different finessin the system now get in position lord um kobe i ont pass the ball swish they gone have to do they job bitch how u wanna eat but dont wanna get involve i remeber them nights i was locked behind bars scars from my past it made me a dogg get put on shirt get put on fox lyrics hit home like its poison givin u game like a old head blunt in the hand in the morning tatts on my face like a oye aim for the top or the colgate i need me a blunt worth a mortgage dicking her down till she forfeit un stressin me money im focused catching me sales up in loafers over sun benjis she bendin it over i stay in the rearview i need to move over she wanna run game so i pass the controller um stomping it down man i think it need more cutt i figured it out man i feel like i woke up u even seen bodies thats stretched out like yoga fresh bullet wound man it look like a cold cut they say i looker younger man as i get older cant fuck with u if u got hoe tendecies thats the home remedy bitch i dont kiss or hold hands

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2 years ago

Hey @jeremyparejas.7342117, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'intro'! πŸ’₯ The vocals aren't coming out clear, test different mic positions and try to keep the distance between you and the mic consistent. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. πŸ™ Loving the beat selection, good ear! Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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