cut
176 Plays
β’09 Aug 2022
what if i told you before i met you you were exactly what i wanted but that changed.... cause you did, you changed right after our first kid and not to minimize or maximize i was was an issue too, but i want changed and you didnt you were happy with the life we were living and 10 years later i lay it out in a on a beat sheeeyt i was bad but you were wrong you know the things you'd done that could never be forgotten some werent that bad some were rotten memories unforgotten wil haunt in my head shit problem till im dead its rellirelli i just spoke everthing i felt im out....
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Hey @rellirell, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'cut', here are our thoughts π₯ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. π You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ Really feeling the emotion on this track, hits real hard. π "I just spoke everything I felt", thanks for opening up π₯ You might want to try one of our Masterclasses for your next track. They come with ready made lyrics and demos from some of the best rappers on the app. We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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