stuck in my brain
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•06 Aug 2022
stuck inside my brain stuck inside my own brain, a jail wish i could escape from my pain stuck & weeping, stuck in my dreams pleas help me, i need my hoodie to night, for two nights ive been inside,my eyes have been aching, failing hurting, all over this time, i try to be closer up high but sometimes it feels i feel lifes over i am sober, but my brain is colder at times when i am alone but i feel older, cause the pains stronger and i know, i cant let it hold me i got this, amend it following the commandments oh lisaa can't stand it neither can i, im ending all of my pain and sorrow its going to be a long road but i cam help it so I'll keep going on
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Hey @chukwuemeka_chiebuka, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'stuck in my brain', here are our thoughts 💥 Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Try improving your recording quality if you can. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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