Mike Berendowski

facts of life

Mike Berendowski
facts of life

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03 Aug 2022

Donnie pulled up body covered in black, He didn’t have a plan But had a gat and a mask, Tryna find a quick way To come up with some cash, Toss the piece in the river And clothes in the trash. He walked into the bank He said hands in the air, Put the money in the bag Or I’m killin you dear, Guard tried playing hero Donnie showing no fear, Took a shot at the guard And watched him slump in the chair. He dipped out the back And hopped in the truck, Jumped on the highway He was doing a buck, Weaving in and out of traffic He was pushin his luck, Till he was tossed from the whip From the tree that he struck. He could hear 12 coming He saw the lights in the distance, Shot at the first cruiser with his 9 But he missed it, Cut through a back yard Like a man on a mission, Thinking if only the guard At the bank would’ve listened. Surrounded by the fuzz He knew he made a mistake, He thought of his wife And her smiling face, He reached for the gun That he had in his waist, Saw a flash and woke up Back in front of the bank.

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2 years ago

What's up @mikeberendowski, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'facts of life'! πŸ’₯ Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. You're slightly off beat. Practice rappin' and recordin' yourself back to tighten up the timing. The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! πŸ‘Œ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πŸ’ͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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