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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Hey @mary228, We're gonna review your track 'karma is a muthafucka'. Let's get it! Try to draw from personal experience when writin'. It'll give your bars a unique flavour. Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ The track has meaning. π Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try flow on the beat smoother, definitely room for improvement here!Rap your lyrics with some more purpose and meaning, we want to hear you say your bars with confidence, it's difficult to hear all your bars right now! The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ Menacing beat! The piano keys are eerie! πΉ Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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