Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @elpookie818, It's time for us to take a look at '#LOOKING_4DA_GOLDEN_TICKET'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. Your rhyming is tight. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 "I'm tryna have everything in my life, I want to be that one!" - you do you man! Keep grinding and working & you give yourself the best possible chance to make it to no1!! 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Loving the catchy guitar plucks on this too! Improving the audio quality would go a long way in levelling up your track!📈 Try out different microphone positions and recording locations! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

fadzdartist

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

cadmusmusic

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥