Chaalee

2 years ago

off rip I'd say look for other singers to make the hooks and chorus type shit. bars sound like they're murmured or mumbled some time but the flow sounds catchy you know where you're going however you could push yourself harder. but if you just do it for fun. you're in the right direction. the verse snaps at 1:35 ish and that flow there matches your voice more but make sure to pronounce the bars because words are what mater. pronunciation is everything. Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏