TOKYO NIGHT (22:03:49)
it’s like 4 and the morning it’s running up my check yesterday it wasn’t a great day move meant boys you can’t stop me shake that bleeding out heart Dice Spence suu the boys have to come home tomorrow morning and then go back to the school tomorrow yo tb fr oh yea we just got home from work today and then It’s a hot summer boy it’s like outside now in Baltimore mamas EJ and then you go back to sleep oh yea oh yeah I love it so much and love mommy daddy and call me when you have time to talk later love y’all guys love y’all bye bye love you mommy
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Hey @jlcogva8cx, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'TOKYO NIGHT (22:03:49)', here are our thoughts 💥 Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. 👍 We're digging your flow on this one, the skill and confidence is clear. Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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great job with this track... keep up the good work
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