Jake

Author

4 years ago

I’ve been missin you Oh I been trippin you I come every single day I still Love you I still laugh with you every single day I wish you were alive now I didn’t want you to die You died when I was born here’s a joke did you know that elephants blow horns I wish you were alive right now but I don’t want to cry oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow I miss you I wish you would come back so I wrote this rap My mom told me you died before I was born I wanted to cry but then I got my strength and said tears bye-bye This is the song to you uncle Jarvis & uncle Raymond name almost sounds like uncle Marvis and your name almost sounds like uncle paymond

👑MrEmanuel myseteri 🏆🌈

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @fdrmgtedub, We're gonna review your track 'I miss ya'. Let's get it! Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

🇨🇦KingC🇨🇦

4 years ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Gabbybadazz

4 years ago

I like it it sound very good this is a nice song good job

Hbcgbvcv

4 years ago

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