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Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Yo @AlfredJackson.1! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'renegade'! π₯ You got great bars here. π You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. This beat choice is great for you! πΌ The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! This track needs a bit of work. We can hear your passion for rap and we like the energy. However, the recording quality has really let you down. If you can work on this and ensure your vocals are crisp we know your tracks will live up to their potential! You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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