Shiny object
Lil Sweet62 Plays
β’15 Jul 2022
When I was on a plane, I saw shiny object from the sky. I am sure it was you, da Vinci painted mona Lisa, because that time u couldn't be found I'm waiting for the day when i'll look at the star in your eyes instead of looking in the skies I like to walk behind u just to be sure that you are safe. not bcoz of watching your ass.
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Hey @little_sweet, We're gonna review your track 'Shiny object '. Let's get it! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Why not try using some of our in-app effects, such as auto-tune or equalizer, to take your track to the next level? Make sure to remember your βwhyβ when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all! We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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