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Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
What's up @richardleeheathington, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'delusion'! ๐ฅ Your bars are good, keep it up! ๐ The rhyming is well put together. โจ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. ๐ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. ๐ถ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. ๐ Make sure to remember your โwhyโ when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all! We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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