Eternal Daylight _
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EternalDaylight - Questions Answered

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2 years ago

Hey @daywalker317, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'EternalDaylight - Questions Answered ', here are our thoughts πŸ’₯ The lyrics are fire, nicely done! πŸ™Œ The rhyming is well put together. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. πŸ‘ We also really like the melodies too! You've definitely got a creative mind! 🧠 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! πŸ™ Try toning down the effects a little! You've made a good start, but its all about refinement! πŸ’― Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! πŸ‘Œ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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