LaRry ThA DoN PreSeNtS HoLd On Ft An Produced By TrEL On ThE BeAt
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β’03 Jul 2022
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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Hey @thadraperdon, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'LaRry ThA DoN PreSeNtS HoLd On Ft An Produced By TrEL On ThE BeAt'! π₯ You got so many dope bars on this one! We like the rhyming too, it's tight. β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ Your voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! π However the recording quality takes sooo much away from this track! At the minute, there's tons of distortion on the vocal track! Try and remove this to get this track to be an actual banger! π₯ A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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