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Yo @jamesmoore.7291368, It's time for us to take a look at 'take me '! π₯ We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ The track has meaning. π Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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