16 bars
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β’19 Jun 2022
Run this uppppp let me see yβallβs 16s!! Please like and comment what you think drop a follow as well I post bangers all the time
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Yo @_JDA! Waddup. Let's take a look at '16 bars'! π₯ Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Try switchin' up the flows to add some more variation on this one! π― This could add some dope momentum to your tracks! The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Seems to be a tiny bit of distortion on the vocal here too! The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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