Breath of Life
76 Plays
•19 Jun 2022
Focus on the breath of life. In time you will receive What’s due to you In full. Through strife you will succeed. Life can be pain of memories Tormenting. Pulling motions from the innards. Living in the middle Of a saint and a sinner. Flows of a river in the center To and fro since the beginning A sound was heard Then came the word Manifesting Never ending. Onwards to always and infinity Going forward Never back into that time Where I could never see Into the darkness and go beyond Rise with patience for you shall grow, Past the rising sun. Amongst a people of a multitude.
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Hey @aloveinflames, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Breath of Life'! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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