ᵂ𝙂ᴬ𝝤ⱽ𝘿ᴱ ❦ 𝘿𝙐𝙍𝙊

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Swag Breeze

2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @magnoliafresh, Here's some feedback on your track 'Smoking On Broccoli 🥦 🚬', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. ✨ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! Yess, we are loving this beat choice! 🧨 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. Think you could dial back the effects a little. Sometimes less is more. There's definitely some sound distortion particularly when the 808s hit, and we felt your flow could've done with a little more structure and cohesion as the track sounds a little disjointed. Try separating the verses from the hook more clearly. Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎