90babyjt

2 years ago

aye get another beat and do it over this wasn't the right beat cuz u got some shii to get off ya chest I see

J HAVOC

2 years ago

pretty damn good bro keep up the good work

PUNCHGOD

2 years ago

ok honest feedback: write your lyrics down 1st.. freestyling is cool 4 practice, but what u post on your page should reflect the final draft not a rough draft... u were obviously winded & had to take a few lines off to catch ya breath... don't rhyme the same word (ie about/about) unless the bar really hits hard.. u got some potential tho, just need to focus more on the writing than the rapping... get the writing down & the rap part will come ez to u