Astronaut (15:58)
Asher Mckeown32 Plays
•14 Jun 2022
Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself
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Hi there @ashermckeown, Here's some feedback on your track 'Astronaut (15:58)', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
what is the deal with ya I think you should do something different
Good job work on you voice but good job #bloodCrew$$$$ follow me.
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