straight righms
Jplzombie27 Plays
•12 Jun 2022
when you here shots youll see a hole in your chest and when im feeling blessed whilst tryint to impress guess who pulling up with a AK-47 im riding on a track shooting you in youe back your paralised on the floor im not playing borderlands2 trying to collect the power core 4 shots fired then your feeling tired
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Yo @jplzombie! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'straight righms'! 💥 Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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My 11 year old nephew on same beat as me yano @jplzombie
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