coming home mom❤
Coming home yea Life was a struggle but I made it I've never felt so loved like dis in my life it's so lit yea yea yea yea now I'm with my family that actually cares about me I was in a world that was blind now I can see yea yea yea yea I thought dis day would never happen now I'm home and happy yea yea lil Ace peace yah
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Hey @lil63, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'coming home mom❤'! 💥 Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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