heaven song I hop I make It
bb cookie letplay17 Plays
•12 Jun 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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keep going bro you got this homie keep going
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Hey @bbcookieletplay, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'heaven song I hop I make It'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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