Landen Osgood
Landen Osgood

beceipt you

beceipt you

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11 Jun 2022

yeah yeah lost ever timeless stressed out I missed out I lost my life I gained a life he only made strife though back mission tossed out ever wishing made up forgiven bossed up I'm wishing that I had you at the moment I forgave everything that you don't condone you did that you made up you rid that you gave up on me I never thought I see the day you lonely you made me want you then you couldn't ran off to and I never knew what the f*** I had I was in the past looking real bad I was really getting it often with it coughing off this purple Haze in my f****** lung cuz I paid every little line that I wanted cuz I laid every little stack every little book every Little shack got to f****** broke back on this b**** cuz I'm really wrong I miss you I made up I missed you grab a tissue there's an issue there's a trust time that's stuck in complacent ever known I feel it real good cuz I'm ever blown I'm in the field of strife in a life in love after life backwards motion fluid potion gifted shifted off this Earth cuz I'm lifted back to birth cuz I biffed it I never knew my pops however blew my scene on one looking me Jane preteen up never name f*** this life I'm never made from strife come on one I kill a n***** I take him out this world cuz I'm feeling n***** I'm on One digging every line that we pay cut digging with the shovel cuz I paid line wake up on one makeup she never knew what she had television was gone and in the grave and mad I was in another world lifetime I never knew had a girl she would never know what the f*** I really knew what I felt up in the flame where I get it like the belt back to the same back to the back back to the job all around the tag all do this m*********** 50 come on I'm with it don't you don't every little line that I want to have come home boys in the Lost motionless complacent displacement gravitational pull is real strong yet I never knew what I really had till it's gone yet and pulled me real close till I couldn't escape the motion ever complacent notion

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2 years ago

Yo @landmine2.0, It's time for us to take a look at 'beceipt you'! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Good rhyming here, keep it up! ✨ We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. 👍 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Some laid back vibes on this one but the vocals are a lil unclear, try reducing the effect levels to really bring out the best of your vocals! 💯 We think you chose the right beat for this track tho, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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