Stars

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09 Jun 2022

Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself

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2 years ago

Hey @morningstar.7246063, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Stars'! πŸ’₯ Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. You'r riding that beat flawlessly, so confident. Great work. 🌠 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🀟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! πŸ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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