I'M ON THE WAY
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β’09 Jun 2022
I'M ON THE WAY Im on the way yea im on the way she got my heart and im here to stay No time play yea no time to play imma make sure shawty is my bae Im on the way yea im on the way she got my heart and im here to stay No time play yea no time to play imma make sure shawty is my bae heart keeps beating triple time when her love is on my mind shawty right here is so fine and divine she keeps runnin through my mind its my heart that needs to be refined I hope she'll be mine I hope she'll be mine she got my time can't wait to whine Not wasting time to make her mine Im on the way yea im on the way she got my heart and im here to stay No time play yea no time to play imma make sure shawty is my bae Im on the way yea im on the way she got my heart and im here to stay No time play yea no time to play imma make sure shawty is my bae
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Hey @desotos_diamond, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'I'M ON THE WAY'! π₯ We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π Good choice of beat! πΌ Seems to be a tiny bit of distortion on the vocal here! Try rectifying this to perfect your sound! π The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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