why do I cry
Elliemay Davis49 Plays
•09 Jun 2022
every night lay down thin i close my eyes thin I start to cry. and i dont know the reason why. why do i feel so much pain inside of me is it cause you drifted so far away tell me do you miss me tell me me why do i cry. evry night I lay down thin i start to cry and i don't know the reason why.i feel so much pain inside.. is it cause you so far away.
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Yo @elliemaydavis.7242373! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'why do I cry'! 💥 Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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