Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @ibramsabri, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'TakeMeAway (21:14)'! 💥 Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 You got great bars here. 🙌 Try playin' around with different words to create the perfect rhyme scheme. We like the underlying theme behind the bars! You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

👑 Firstar ⭐

2 years ago

Great track nice bars nice beat can be improved

Skarred

2 years ago

is this just a instrumental? if not definitely get a mic my dude. they sell ones at the dollar tree they will get you through till you get your funds up