What's up @kingwhitney,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Comfortable Discomfort'! ๐ฅ
Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one.
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! ๐ถ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. ๐
This beat choice is great for you! ๐ผ
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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rap fame first, no effects, 1 take
you not even rapping or rhymingโฆ.work on yo flow my g
okay I see you definitely did what you could and this is a potential vibe,you should give it more bass and energy to deliver for real
Too low ๐ฅ๐ป Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
What's up @kingwhitney, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Comfortable Discomfort'! ๐ฅ Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! ๐ถ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. ๐ This beat choice is great for you! ๐ผ You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Yooooooooooo Nice vibes Decent flow Use headphones to improve your quality ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
@JamesWrld999